<background music>
Alistair: we can have it with the music in the backgroundbackground
^ vague language
Barnaby: why not? Or maybe not…
A: how’s it going miss?
^vague language
B: I think it might be a bit loud for the microphone though
^ vague language, using pronoun not noun
A: let’s do it–
^interruption
B: it’s really hard finding the best spot to record
Miss Shuil: Barnister! You are here because?
B: we’re doing English
S: so you should be in English?
A: nah, we-we’re trying to record a conversation between ourselves, we need to find a place, a quiet place
^ dialectdialect/verbal filler
S: well this isn’t quiet!
A: yeah I know but-
S: go into the corridor where it’s quiet
A: nice background music!
B: ha let’s go, Come on Alistair!
^ verbal filler
A: this is it
^vague language
Vague language/pronouns instead of nouns : 4
Interruptions: 2
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